It was yet another day of heavy downpour. It had been raining heavily everywhere and reports of flood in various parts of the country were flashed by news channels all day. While everybody was bothered by the incessant rains, Vedant had more than one reason to be worried. He was standing near the windowsill, looking up at the sky; the usually blue sky was today dotted with white spongy, mist like clouds at some places whereas at others black smoky, angry clouds loomed over the sky.
“The war is just
intensifying.” Vedant muttered to himself. He pulled out of his pocket a vial
of shimmering purple liquid. He took a white sheet of paper and spilled two
tiny drops of liquid onto the sheets. Within seconds the liquid droplets
scattered across the sheet to form a sentence “There are no messages.” and then
disappeared. Vedant, looking dejected and disappointed, folded the sheet of
paper and hit it between his clothes in his cupboard. As the evening approached
the rains slowed down to a drizzle but the sky was still dense with dark
clouds.
“The war has been called off
for the day, I think. But judging by the dark clouds, it was a gruesome
battle.” Vedant thought to himself. All, he could now do was wait for a message
summoning him to the battle filed.
12 year old Vedant was no
ordinary child. He was a part of a group of stars sent down to earth to be born
as humans; it was the job of these star kids to monitor activities on earth and
then send a detailed report to the Lord. Vedant was entrusted with an even more
special job - to act as an arbitrator between hell and heaven. Contrary to the
popular belief on earth, hell was not below the earth; rather the sky was
divided into two equal parts, Heaven- the angel’s abode and Hell – the devil’s
retreat. Every departed soul spent time in both these places, depending on
their sins or good deeds. There had been peace between them until recently when
all hell broke loose over an argument as to who was Lord’s favorite. Heaven and
hell declared a war on each other. This was the cause of the incessant rains.
The angels fought with thunderbolts and devils fought with lightening spears.
Every time the war would intensify the clouds would darken up and whenever a
thunderbolt or a lightening spear would strike the clouds, it would rain on
earth.
The morning dawned dull and
restless. There was a slight drizzle which threatened to turn the morning into
another day of thunderstorm. Vedant was impatiently waiting to be summoned by
the lord to help resolve the war. He once again took out the white sheet of
paper from his cupboard, dropped two drops of purple liquid on to the sheets.
He waited for a while, but nothing happened. Just as he was about to fold the
sheet back, a message in bold letters appeared.” URGENT. REPORT IMMEDIATELY TO
THE LORD’S DWELL” Vedant smiled grimly and folded the paper. He went to his
mother and lied about completing his homework at a friend’s place. Once out of
the house he headed towards the unused shed in his backyard. He opened the door
and went inside. He, once, peeped out of the window to ensure no one was
around. Then, he touched a star shaped sapphire stone on his index finger of
his right hand. Immediately it began to glow brighter and brighter till he
entire room was engulfed in the bright light. Vedant shouted, “LORD’S DWELL”
and in a split second disappeared from the shed.
Humble servant paced
restlessly up and down his room. Vedant had been summoned an hour ago and there
was still no trace of him. Humble was Lord’s right hand man and headed the
department of prayers, wishes and dreams. He had requested lord to summon
Vedant earlier to resolve the war, but Lord had ordered “Let hell and heaven
have a chance to sort out their differences on their own.” But now after two
days of the war, lord had ordered Humble servant to summon Vedant.
This was Vedant’s second
visit to the Lord’s dwell. The first time he had only met Humble Servant, who
had initiated him as a star kid and trained him for his job. He had never met
the Lord himself. Lord’s dwell was on the highest whitest and the spongiest
cloud in the whole sky. The moment he reached, he briskly marched up to
Humble’s room. On seeing Vedant, he quickly turned about and marched to the
other end of the hall. Vedant understood there was no type to exchange
pleasantries and he quietly followed Humble. At the end of the hall was a door;
a plain looking simple arch shaped door. Humble said, “Step in Vedant, the lord
wants to meet you alone.” Vedant nodded his head, opened the door and he stepped
inside. The door clang shut behind him. Vedant had always wondered how the lord
looked like. Down on earth lord had different forms and names but Vedant had
always been curious about lord’s true form; and today he was going to meet the
lord for himself. It was a large room and was completely empty. A glass ceiling
allowed the warm sunlight to penetrate into the room and to Vedant’s amazement
as the sunlight fell on the walls of the room, various images flashed across
the wall; of kids playing, people praying, happy lives, busy lives, sad faces,
excited faces.
Suddenly a voice boomed
behind him, “Vedant my child, the day has come for you to help the world from
an impending disaster.” Vedant looked around the room to locate the source of
the voice, but there was no one in the room. The voice rang again,”You cannot
see me Vedant; I am everywhere yet I am nowhere. It is man who has given me a
form a figure; I am all but that tiny voice that rattles your conscience every
time you sin.” Vedant closed his eyes and bowed in respect.
“Now Vedant both devil and
angel, are my children and I love them equally. Both of them have a duty to
perform and they play an important role in regulating the balance between good
and evil in the world. This fight between them has made them blind towards
their duties. Vedant now is your time to put your training and hard work to
effect and settle the dispute between them.”
“Yes my lord, bless me so
that I can do my best”
“You always have my
blessings”
Vedant along with Humble
approached the war caps. Though souls can never be killed they could be
injured; the war camp looked more like a hospital’s casualty ward with injured
soul-diers on both sides of the warring teams. Vedant and humble decided to
meet angel first.
The angel’s war camp was
brimming with activities. Strategies for the next day’s attack was being drawn
out, weapons were being polished and checked for their dents and damages and
wounded souls were being attended to. Dressed in a suit of armor over his silk
flowing gown, angel was a sight for irony. His white robe had for long, as long
as time could remember, been the symbol of calm and peace. His helmet was
adorned with a red and white feather. When he saw Humble and Vedant
approaching, he dismissed his workers and welcomed them into his tent. “Did
lord send you?” he directly asked. Vedant smiled and replied,” Sire angel, what
is the basis of this war? I am sure you are aware of the havoc it is causing on
earth. Is this war absolutely necessary? Can we not resolve the issue over
talks?
“How dare he claim to be
lord’s favorite?” angel thundered. “I represent the good and the devil stands
for the evil. Every soul wants to enter into heaven not hell. Angel’s are loved
by humans but no one loves the devil. Then how can he be lord’s favorite? No,
Vedant, this issue cannot be resolved by talks.” After an hour of persuading,
angel finally agreed to meet the devil in Vedant’s presence before beginning
the war next day.
Next Vedant and humble
approached the devil’s camp. The devil looked ferocious and scary with black
metal armor and skull helmet.
“I will not meet that high
and mighty angel. I am the one who bears the burden of the world’s evil. I
punish the souls for their sins and prepare them to be eligible to enter
heaven. When I worker harder than angel, how dare he claim to be lord’s
favorite.”
Vedant sighed and persuaded
devil to meet angel once more before he decides on tomorrow’s attack.
Vedant stared at humble
across the table; they had been sitting there for quite awhile now and still
angel and devil had not spoken a word to each other. They were all sitting
around a round table; with angel and devil sitting across each other. Vedant
asked,” Do you both know why lord created both of you?” both angel and devil
looked at Vedant curiously. “He wanted to balance the existence of good and
evil in the world. Had there been no hell, the world would be filled with
sinners and had there been no heaven, goodness would have never been
appreciated. So you are both very important for the existence of earth. You
both together maintain the balance of the earth; no one is more or less
important than the earth. We all have a duty to perform and doing the best in
our work is what brings us closer to lord. Then how can any one of you be
lord’s favorite? He loves you both equally and he wants you to call off this
war.”
Both angel and devil looked
at each other sheepishly. They realized their foolishness and shook hands to
call off the war. Humble said to Vedant,” You have successfully completed your
first mission. Congratulations young man” Vedant smiled and replied,” I am
happy the war has been called off. Its getting late I better head home, my
mother will be getting worried.”
Vedant rang the doorbell of
his house. His mother opened and the door, and looking at Vedant’s tired face
she remarked “You look exhausted Vedant. It’s as if you weren’t doing your
homework rather you were busy saving the world from some catastrophe.”
Vedant winked and smiled to
himself.
And I have the inspiration of this story recorded on my phone. Too cool Neha, it was fun reading this one again :)
ReplyDeleteHahaha.. I totally forgot about that.. Thanks a ton Saumya. Though this story is where it all began, but it truly did when you asked me to write it down. So there! Voila! It's you again :* :)
ReplyDeleteHahahaha! Leaves you with a smile :)
ReplyDeleteI like it Neha! Love the concept of star children. I would've liked it if you had fleshed out Vedant's speech a little more, me being the philosophy dud that I am :p
Its short and sweet and gripping. The images are B E A U tiful. The flow of the narrative shows just how natural a writer you are :)
Lovely. Keep writing!
Anirudh you caught the major flaw in this write up :) . I'll tell you what happened. This was for a submission and being my first attempt I took a long while to write it, so long that I had just an hour left to pass the deadline and I wasn't even half way through. I just wanted to get over with it and hurried through the Vedant's speech part. But later try how much i may, I just couldn't rework that part, as if some jinx. So then I let it be :/
DeleteBut thanks for the comment ani.. Happy you made me :P